Peer Reflection with Redyta

Peer Reflection

Redyta, one of my friends whom I believe you has more knowledge and ability towards English at all. In checking, I did not find many false about grammatical. You have good idea that sometimes the others' people don’t think so. You also have the enough vocabulary to make your idea work. It is a nice, because I think, it is the basic you will get the best in your writing.

Then, if I analyze, your writing skill is increasing. For example, in the first work, you wrote about your mathematics autobiography. If I see from the quantity, it is not enough to explain your idea. Then when I see from coherence, you put main idea at all sides your paragraph. It made me confuse. However, in the welcome letter, you are very complete with the sides of a welcome letter. Good job Redyta! Keep the increase to make your work have coherence, but don’t forget with the grammatical.